Beginning 1: Using 3 powerful words (and dare I say, descriptive too!)
Maleficent, menacing, monstrous. Those were the very three words that instantly entered my mind when I think back about him. James and his accomplices strode confidently through the field, amidst the mist. The very moment I lay my eyes on James, I knew he was an ominous symbol of trouble. James was blond, his locks tied loosely. He was pallid, and his skin complemented his honey-combed locks well. He seemed as though he had not shaved for a few days and looked more barbaric with his deep-set eyes that were a livid red. The same unblinking eyes insolently bore into my very soul, immediately giving me a feeling of uneasiness, which likened a lasso tied around me .His thin, purplish lips slowly curved into a menacing sneer and my instincts told me he was concocting something malevolent.
(Good one girls, and of course Jian Cheng!)
Beginning 2
Thunder rumbled in the distance and Bella’s heart palpitated wildly as she pressed her hand on the cold, hard surface of the glass door and pushed it open. A shiver went up her spine, as the door hinges squeaked ominously, breaking the still silence. Out of the blue, a familiar cry rang through the entire ballet studio. She heard a voice that sounded like that of her mother’s. Her heart leaped and there was a glimmer of hope in her eyes. Bella scampered towards the source of the sound. She slammed open the door with immense strength. But little did she realise that it was just a trick played by the sinister and dangerous James. She saw a shiny silver laptop sitting on the top of the table. It was then Bella woke up and realised that she was conned.
