hey kiddos, hope youre having a good break so far.. i know it has been crazy these past few days, what with trying to catch up with old friends, family and having to complete all the hw that your teachers have bestowed upon you.. lol. well, hope that you do try to get some rest and watch some good tv and read some good stuff.
regarding the synopsis of your script, some of the other classes, not under me, have been given the extension to submit synopsis when school reopens. so to be fair, this will apply to all of you in 2C 2E and 2H. do spread the word around.
hopefully this will lighten your load a little bit.
take care, have some rest and do keep our friends in Japan and everywhere else in the world in your prayers. doesnt matter what your religion is, like i aways say, we all bleed the same :)
best regards, miss n
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Thursday, February 17, 2011
hey you
Have you been hitting refresh for the past few hours?
:) I wanted to post online, your marks i mean. but im not sure im doing it for the right reasons. initially i thought maybe it will spur you to do better.. since your performance this time round was sad to say, abysmal. oh wells.. im sorry to the pple whose names i mentioned in class. but you'll have to wait. till the end of lesson. but i have decided for the failures, there WILL be a retest. only if YOU want it. only if you CARE ENOUGH for it. if youre willing, then im willing to assess you one more time. that is my word.
till then, give your best tmr. rmbr to see from the perspective of the characters. connect with your heart, your mind, and play pretend. imagine you are who you are writing about. quote example from the passage, and not bring in other life stories. use the text as your sole feed. read the text and visualise. imagine. believe. breathe.
all the best.
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Monday, February 14, 2011
Sample 2
A Secret Place Have you ever discovered a secret place in your very own house? Have you ever been attacked by a creature thrice the size of you before? Well, I have. And they were experiences I’d never forget. One day, I was tasked to clean the shelf in the storeroom of my house. Reluctantly, I proceeded to do my task. As usual, the storeroom was dusty, covered in cobwebs with dully painted walls. I had always felt something mysterious whenever I go to the storeroom, but had never got to see anything unusual, except for a small door behind the shelf. Unfortunately, I was never allowed to open or enter it. This day, in order to clean the shelf spick and span, I had to move the shelf away from the wall it was leaning on to clean the back of it. When I moved the shelf away, I noticed the small door again. This time, there was nobody around. If I could just sneak in to see what’s inside the door, come out; put the shelf back to its original position, nobody would find out. Out of curiosity, I pulled the handle of the small door. It creaked open. It was pitch-dark. The air was moist in the secret place; there was no light, just complete darkness. Suddenly, I sensed some movement in the air around, and I went further in. I saw a dark patch of figure, like a silhouette. As I went closer, I seemed to be able to see his face although there was no light around, and I got the first clear look of the creature. He was seven feet tall, his arms and legs like something from the cover of ‘Muscle Man’ magazine – bulging biceps and triceps, all stuffed like baseballs under vein-webbed skin. Coarse brown hair started at about his bellybutton and got thicker as it reached his shoulders. His neck was a mass of muscle and fur leading up to his enormous head, which had a snout as long as my arm, snotty nostrils with a gleaming brass ring, cruel black eyes and horns. I recognized the creature immediately, it was from one of my Greek myths book. A Minotaur – half-bull, half-man. I let out a loud, piercing yell. I mean, that’s what a normal twelve-year-old child would do when they see a creature thrice the size of them, not to mention the horns. Provoked, the Minotaur attacked. He ran straight towards me at lightning speed. I managed to dodge him at the last moment, making him slam head-on to a weird-looking tree, but that just made it more furious. I turned and dashed towards the small door and managed to jump out into the real world from the secret enchanted place right before I was slammed into a pancake. I closed the door and put the shelf back. My heart was racing, at least one thousand beats per second. My instincts told me to confide in my grandfather.
I ran as fast as a jackrabbit into my grandfather’s room. I waited a few seconds just to catch my breath and then blurted out the whole story. After hearing my ‘cock and bull story’, grandfather didn’t look surprised at all, he just frowned and then sighed. “The secret place is enchanted with magic, where all sorts of creatures and living things can be found. The Minotaur you had seen is one of the fiercest creatures there. I had found the secret place the first time we moved here, and had understood much of it. You must not reveal this place to anyone, not even your parents. This is a secret between only me and you, do I make myself clear?” Grandfather told me in a serious tone. I nodded, still in disbelief. How could a secret place exist in my very own house without me knowing it? I decided to go back to the storeroom, just to make sure the small door was properly closed and the shelf was leaning on it, so the mythical creatures inside have no chance of escaping. When I reached there, my jaw dropped wide open. To my horror, the small door leading to the secret place was left ajar. I approached it, thinking who or what might have possibly gotten in or out. When I stepped into the secret place, my heart skipped a beat. Right in front of me, my younger brother, Austin, was groaning in agony on the ground, the Minotaur behind him. I immediately knew that Austin had somehow come into here and was attacked by the Minotaur. Without hesitation, I screamed at the top of my voice, “Grandpa!” Fortunately, grandfather came in the nick of time. He said some magic words at the Minotaur and he immediately stopped attacking Austin and retreated back into the bushes. Austin’s face was pale, as white as sheet. He was trembling from head to toe and he had a few scratches on him. Grandfather and I quickly lifted him up and carried him back to his room. He took out a magic potion from a secret shelf in his room and fed Austin. The potion worked very fast, in a few seconds, Austin regained consciousness. He told us the whole story about how he had overheard grandfather and my conversation, and went to the secret place to check it out. Grandfather reprimanded him for going to the secret place despite the fact that he knew he was not allowed to, and had almost gotten himself killed. After much discussion, we decided that the safest thing to do was to hide the secret place. We sealed the entrance of it with cement, and agreed to pretend that none of this had ever happened. What happened to the secret place still remains a mystery.
Done by Tzu Heng's group
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For 2011 Narrative Samples CA
A Secret Place Mystical. Mysterious. Magical. These words are how I would describe my secret place. It is a place that is only known to me and no one else. It is a place of comfort and relaxation where I spent most of my time at. However, all that changed when I went further than usual. The garden was unsightly at first, but after my tender care, the flowers started to bloom Beautifully and attracted several colorful butterflies. Bees swoop in occasionally to pollinate the flowers. Reading a book near the bushes, there was a rustling sound coming from the bushes. My heart skipped a beat. I thought this place was isolated? As I walked towards the bush, my heart palpitated wildly, My hands turned cold and clammy and my legs turned jelly. Two eerie eyes popped out of the bushes and it sent a chill down my spine. I screamed in horror and my heart almost jumped out of my mouth. Suddenly, a black cat with glowing emerald eyes leaped out of the bushes and almost scratched my eyes! In self defense, I hit the cat and it fell to the ground. Motionless, I thought that was the end of my trouble. When suddenly, I find myself surrounded by hundreds of agitated snarling cats! One by one, the cats started to leap towards me with their claws sticking out of their paws. I was too shocked to move and almost fainted from the pain of being scratched by the monster cats I felt as if I was being ripped apart. By some divine intervention, I saw streaks of sunlight emerging from the east and slowly, the cats begin to shake vigorously and retreated into the bushes. I heaved a sigh of relief. I realised the sun was my savior and that the monster cats were fearful of the sun. Till today, I only visit this secret place in daylight and never stayed too late.
By: Shi Hui, Xin Yi, Jia Ying, Jaslyn, Teresa, Chia Mang. Yu jie
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Tuesday, March 2, 2010
Visuali(Sing) Poetry
Hi kids,
If you are interested in viewing the videos we watched in class, here are the links
I hope youve enjoyed the poems we studied last week. William Blake and Emily Dickinson are amongst my favourite poets. Lovely lovely.
Now, your tasks. :)
Find 5 examples of alliteration used in poems or phrases as well as 5 examples of personification online (or even better create your own!) and print them out.
We'll share our findings the next time we meet.
Toodles,
Miss Nn
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tech-no-logic!
Hi Kiddos,
Hows it goin? Hope youve had some time to rest over the weekend.
Im been experiencing some problems updating and uploading materials to blogger from my home PC so apologies for not updating this blog. Will solve the kinks asap.
See you in school my darls...
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Friday, January 22, 2010
Sec 1 2010 assignment
Hi kids!
For this week's assignment I want you guys to look at handout 3 (line patterns & stanza structure). Look at the section on shape poems.
I want you to come up with your own shape poem! Be as creative as you can and do it on a drawing paper. I'd like to display the good ones on our literature board...
For more examples, you can refer to my old posts where I posted the masterpieces done my students from '09 lit batch.
